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Pros: Music, dramatic
Cons: Animation was a bit awkward at times
I for one enjoyed the music. Although, whoever said it was correct, it sort of needed to be more dynamic, good ideas though, I liekd the strings. Of course, some people have underdeveloped taste and would rather you put thrash metal or something goofy like that. Overall it was pretty good, well delivered. Your animation, while awkward at times, was pretty much consistant which made the bad parts less distracting so it was easier to watch the whole thing. Keep improving, nice work.